37 thoughts on “Finished reports

  1. Well done Belle and Nooreen. I love the amount of imagination you put into your work! Next time maybe you could both use advanced vocabulary and adjectives. Keep up the great work. I rate them both
    ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅ stars
    Sorry I couldn’t find some proper stars in the emojis.

  2. Great Work Nooreen๐Ÿค—I enjoyed reading your lovely article .It was very creative and interesting. Keep up the good work!โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Š

  3. Nice one Noreen ๐Ÿ˜Š

    Your introduction really grabbed my attention. I wanted to keep reading.

    You’ve pressed ideas clearly, through writing.
    You have a vibrant imagination and excels in creative writing.

    Keep up the hard work ๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿผ

  4. Nooreen i really enjoyed reading your article๐Ÿ‘I thought that it was very inventive and will definitely make all your readers laugh! You have used amazing descriptive language to portray your thoughts about a person and this will get the reader on your side๐Ÿ˜€One thing to improve on is to be more adventurous with your language choices.This was an outstanding peice of work!!๐ŸŒŸโญ๏ธI hope to read more of your fabulous writing in the future ๐Ÿ˜Š

  5. Fabulous report Nooreen!
    I really like the way you chose the characters names and the places, as well as how you made us keen to know what was going to happen at the end.
    I can’t wait to read your next reports ๐Ÿ™‚

  6. Noreen
    I really enjoyed reading your report.
    I think your presentation looks great, and I was very impressed with how you have used descriptive text to bring your story more to life๐Ÿ˜‰
    The one advice I will give you is, next time try to put even more in depth details Into your stories.
    Well done! Keep it up!

  7. Wow! Haider I liked your newspaper report, the words you used to describe the characters were very descriptive. Well done!๐Ÿ‘.

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    ๐‘…๐’ถ๐“‰๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘”: โญ โญ โญ โญ โญ

  9. Great work Haider! I love your writing. It made us want to read on. You can improve by putting a caption in the box and make sure the orientation makes sense.

  10. Well done Ella, your work is very good. I have read your marvelous work. Your punctuation is very good. Next time you could improve it by not using the same word over again. But still congratulations!

  11. Amazing reports guys, I really like how you used lots of adjectives and I love your handwriting.
    I also like how you make the report intense and make the reader want to read it more.
    They are very good reports well done!

  12. Fabulous report Belle, brilliant vocabulary. We loved every bit of it. Maybe find a synonym for after because it is mentioned quite a bit in the first paragraph of the 2020 X Factor report.

  13. I loved your newspaper report Ella it had very good punctuation and fronted adverbials it made me and Suraiyah very excited to read the rest of it .Maybe next time you could add more adjectives to make it even better that it already is.

  14. Great writing Dillon next time use a better word than good and improve your handwriting it was a bit hard to read,use more punctuation.

  15. Fantastic writing, I liked your sentence openers and how entertaining it was for the reader.
    Next time double check your spelling to make it even better!

  16. Wow Belle, your newspaper report is very interesting also you have used lots of adjectives, in the future remember to not use so much commas. But you have written a really good descriptive newspaper report!

  17. Belle, you have some very good adjectives and I like the story itโ€™s very good. Aslo I love your fronted adverbials but next time you should add more punctuation it needs more full stops and commas.

  18. Great work Belle! I loved the ‘If only’ paragraph because it had a lot of humour and made me laugh. Keep it up Belle. Next time you could add some more embedded clauses.

  19. I really like the report Nooreen, I love the plot where the 69 year-old beats Lucas.
    I think that one thing you could improve is the repetition of ‘Sally’ in the third paragraph. 5/5 from me!

  20. Fantastic writing,we love the fronted adverbials,embedded clauses and pronouns. Next time you could include subordinate clauses and more detail.

  21. Belle you have used lots of descriptive launguage and we really like your fronted adverbials and your imagination.Maybe next time you could use some pro nouns.Fantastic work! Keep it up.๐Ÿ‘

  22. Amazing writing Belle, you have used very good sentence starters and used descriptive language.I can’t wait to see what happens next.To improve you could make the writing a bit clearer and bigger but the writing was marvellous.Well done Belle.

  23. Awesome fronted adverbial Nooreen, you are so good at using your imagination. Next time, try and use more advanced vocabulary. Keep up the good work!

  24. Amazing report Nooreen, we really like all of the sentence starters and the description. We think you could improve on using some colons and semi colons. Well done!

  25. Awesome, I love all the description and fronted adverbials! Abi.

    Superb I loved the vocabulary and I felt like I was in the action! Blake.

  26. Wow Ella, fantastic descriptive writing, you have used lots of embedded clauses.
    Next time try to vary your sentence starters. Well done!

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